Progress on Critical Report
I have completed the first draft of the critical report, incorporating a number of images to substantiate my arguments and references.
Throughout the writing process, I have encountered challenges in linking and transitioning between paragraphs, as well as organizing the extensive research information drawn from a variety of sources, including historical accounts, videos, scholarly articles, and books. To address this, I decided to adopt a clear structural approach. I now begin each paragraph in the main discussion with a concise topic sentence, followed by elaboration and explanation, supported by references or quotations. This is then followed by further analysis and reinforcement of the argument. By using this method, I aim to ensure that the essay is more organized and coherent.
I plan to consult with a few language tutors to seek guidance on improving and refining this approach.