My Previs Progress
This is my current previs progress.
Changes made
- What I like about this version:
This version feels more organized, and I now view it as a true previsualization. With the added details, I can more clearly envision the final outcome, which gives me a stronger sense of direction for the animation’s development.
2. What I do not like about this version:
Despite the improvements, there are still aspects that need refinement. Specifically, the transition between certain shots feels slightly awkward, and some of the camera angles could be more consistent to enhance spatial continuity.
3. What should I change on top of George’s comments:
In addition to the feedback provided by my tutor, I recognize a few areas that require further adjustments. For instance, I need to revisit the 180-degree rule to ensure smoother transitions between shots, and I also plan to refine the timing of the balloon’s movement to make the pacing feel more natural.
4. Animating the Clouds:
To add more realism to the scene, I animated the clouds, which I feel significantly improved the atmosphere. The movement now mirrors the natural drift of clouds, contributing to a more dynamic and lifelike environment. I am pleased with the outcome, as it enhances the overall immersion of the scene.
5. What I have learned while working on this version of the previs:
Throughout this process, I’ve gained a deeper understanding of how to balance technical execution with artistic intention. I’ve also refined my skills in shot composition and timing, which will be invaluable as I continue to develop the animation.
6. Challenges Faced:
One of the most challenging aspects of this stage was adjusting the curves in the graphic editor, particularly in the shots where the balloon floats under the car. This required careful manipulation to achieve the right flow and timing. Although the process was difficult, it was a valuable learning experience that improved the overall quality of the animation.
Changes to be made
- Environmental Details and Props:
Upon rewatching the previs, I noticed a discrepancy in the level of detail across different parts of the scene. Some sections feature well-developed buildings, while others rely on simple geometric shapes like cubes and cones as background elements. For a more polished and professional version of the previs, especially if it is to be presented to an audience unfamiliar with my story, I will need to refine the environment and props. This will make the scene more visually coherent and help the audience better understand the context, even if they are not familiar with the narrative.
2. Camera Angles:
Initially, I believed that using the same camera angle twice within the animation could help the audience better understand the continuity of the scene. However, after receiving feedback from my tutor, I now realize that using identical camera angles can lead to redundancy, especially when the shots are not closely connected. In this case, to avoid repetition and maintain visual interest, I have decided to change one of the shots to a different camera angle, ensuring the sequence feels more dynamic and engaging.
3. Speed of the Balloon:
The balloon’s movement still requires refinement, particularly in terms of easing in and out during certain scenes. In some shots, the balloon’s descent is overly gradual, which disrupts the flow of the animation. For future revisions, I plan to adjust the timing so that the balloon moves slower at the beginning of its ascent or descent, particularly when it is near the camera, and accelerates as it moves away, such as when it is floating upwards or falling. This adjustment will create a more natural and dynamic motion, improving the overall pacing and realism of the animation.